Mom’s “Poem a day challenge” April 24th

Offerings to the Queen

 

 

Inside the poem,

the queen waits for something

unlikely yet particular.

 

Perfect snowflakes fall gently,

but look, each is as large

as your open hand.

 

A dark blue thread becomes visible,

linking into a community

all those who share a certain sadness.

 

The visitors all shed shawls

and sweaters to release their new,

bright, opening wings.

jch

1/4/2012

 

 

Make unlikely, yet particular, offerings to the queen.

You get twelve lines —

four three-line stanzas,

or three four-line stanzas.

 

Make each stanza able to stand alone as can each couplet of a ghazal.

 

All the rules are arbitrary.  You are free to ignore them.  The queen has no hold over you.

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